这是一道看图作文,首先需要描写漫画的具体细节,点题。注意到漫画主题是讽刺人们过于依赖手机,所以作文的重点是说明手机的坏的方面。最后一段总结自己的观点,站在中立的角度去思考。
参考词汇:
以..为代价 at the expense of
海量的 magnanimous
每分每秒 around the corner of every second
过马路 cross the street
导盲杆 guide rod
范文
Mobile Phone in People’s Life
From the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are many people crossing the street. Instead of looking at the way, they are staring at their cell phones and using guide rod to see. It is obvious that they are fascinated with cell phones while even ignore their security.
We learn from the cartoon that cell phones have been increasingly widespread in people’s life. Cell phones are of great benefit to all of us. One of the most obvious advantages is that we can contact with our friends and relatives more conveniently than ever before. However, it is mobile-phones’ advantages that lead some people to overuse or be addicted to them, which tends to exert a negative impact on our life. For example, oversusing cellphones will reduce face-to-face communication among people. It seems that most of us enjoy the convenience of contact at the expense of interpersonal relationships. Moreover, entertaining electronic games, magnanimous information and a bewildering variety of social networking tools in mobile phones have occupied much of our time. Information distribution tools and social networking tools, in particular, have attracted all of our attention, which tempts us to keep our eyes on the screen around the corner of every second. Then, do not expect us to talk with the people around us, we don’t have time! This, has resulted in a phenomenon of “alienation between acquaintances and familiarity between strangers”.
Science and technology and modern tools should be served as an “angel” to improve our living strandard, rather than a devil to disturb our normal life and communication.